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Gallery of the Heart
Our palette of love
Multitudinous colors
Blended together
Like our writhing bodies
A masterpiece in the making
This canvas of skin
Wet with perspiration
In the gallery of our hearts
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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U.S.A.
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Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.
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Words.unwritten
Thu, 2023-01-19 14:48
Ah this is just...amazing ...
Ah this is just...amazing ... a work of art so to speak x
Rosewood Apothecary
Mon, 2023-02-13 15:42
Thank you
She makes an art out of living life. She puts up with me and all my “nuances”. Lol. That in itself is an art too!
Tim
author commentCandlewitch
Thu, 2023-01-19 14:57
dear RA
this is excellent! the only way to improve it would be to employ whips and chains and a bit of blood. but that is only my jaded opinion ;)
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Rosewood Apothecary
Thu, 2023-01-19 15:10
My wife has one of her photographs
On exhibit tonight and I get to be her handsome accessory. Arm candy. I’m lucky.
author commentGeezer
Fri, 2023-01-20 11:39
You simply must...
supply us with a copy of that photo, [if it is allowed]. You are truly the arm-candy you describe. Sweet and perfect accessory. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Fri, 2023-01-20 06:47
wow
very beautiful poemy
How happy am I you read me RA
Seren
Mon, 2023-02-13 08:09
Dear Tim
Oh my God. I am going to come back to this one time and again. Its superb. As powerful as a nuclear bomb and at the same time as sublimely sensuous as a stolen moment.
Bellissimo Bravo.
Bookmarked.
Kindest regards Jayne
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
RoseBlack
Mon, 2023-02-13 12:09
How did I miss this
Absolutely brilliant! I trust her exhibit was well received
~RoseBlack~
Rosewood Apothecary
Mon, 2023-02-13 15:39
Thanks
Yes it was well received. In fact, her photo was chosen as one of four pieces to be given awards. I’m very proud of her. She is an accomplished photographer.
Tim
author commentRoseBlack
Mon, 2023-02-13 18:17
That is phenomenal
Congratulations to her!
~RoseBlack~