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Fun Reel Humor

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2023-01-23 07:14

Four fellows went
invitation by heaven sent
we lived like neighbors
hi and bye
never a word beyond that

now all say hurry
the four have gone away

the queue is going shorter
don't miss your chance
no other neighbors may miss you then
when at the end of the queue you plan to remain

left like a desert rat
no one with whom now to chat
the smaller cats will meow
how do you oldie expect
a kiss from me some how

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Last few words:

If only death we could accept it to happen glad we lived all along Four friends just passed a good bye for ever no hi or bye any further

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

lovedly

Mon, 2023-01-23 07:35

Eka thanks a million we must love the living for years spent as

many....
I was only wishing
one day
you would read me

In all my muses
incidents and behaviors of human beings
are inclusive

author comment

lovedly

Mon, 2023-01-23 09:17

Thank you so muchly

will read your poems morely surely
I coin newer words
allow me.......

author comment

Lavender

Mon, 2023-01-23 12:27

Fun Reel Humor

Hello, Lovedly,
It is a certainty, as your poem suggests, and you state so well that we should appreciate these moments we have now with more than a neighborly hello.
Thank you,
Lav

lovedly

Tue, 2023-01-24 04:00