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FROST FLOWER (for Jayne)

Out in the wilds where life runs free
a flower grows innocuously
no hint what it will come to be
as autumn raises its cold head.

A slim green stalk with few small leaves
in bunches it sways in cooling breeze
it's but awaiting a light freeze
before waking petals from their bed.

Then just after the first light frost
yet before hard freeze when all is lost
it blooms with blue flowers embossed
usually near an old homestead.

Sometimes the blue is joined by white
as they explode in color over night
while other flowers fade from sight.
They supplant the yellows and the red.

So flower, far across the sea
who's awaiting winter anxiously
blossom at least once more for me
before you lie down in your bed.

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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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For my friend Jayne who is having a rough time....................stan
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I am honoured its a most beautiful poem that I'll treasure always thank you its a privelage

Brought a happy tear to tired eyes

Biggest hugs of love Jayne xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

You know I seldom write anything directed at one person thus I'm not very good at it. Keep on keeping' on............stan

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A real beaut for our young Lady, we all send our love and healing to her each day.
A great poem for a great lady from a real man,
Yours Ian..

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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

When we're down or in trouble it's always a good thing to know that there are those who love us. Jayne is no different and hopefully this raised her spirits a bit..........stan

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I send thoughts to Jayne each day either on Face Book or Neopoet or "E" Mail, we have been in constant touch for ages.
I leave messages for her all over the place and have been a constant companion, she calls me Da now and I am so pleased that honour has been bestowed on me.
I shall once again compose a piece to lift her spirits as much as I can, we stand there with her as much as possible and the Children I have around are there to let her smile and be at peace with her think.
It has been a hard journey for Jayne I only wish that I could help more.
You both take care and thank you for your ways they are of a great man, Yours, Ian..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

I'm just wondering how to write it. Spirit uplifting poems are rare in my write. hmmm. let me think about this.

Alid

In poetic form what you have done Stan is sent a warm comforting hug to Jayne. I am sure she has felt it and will draw energy from it.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

Kudos to you. This is a wonderful tribute.

Alid

Although she might not be up to replying I think it's a great idea that we all message her every day or two.....stan

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