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THE FLOWER YOU SENT ME

Your heart is full of goodness and love.
I haven't seen such an elegant soul just like you.
Truly, in my heart, you've broaden my affection.
I'll forever keep loving you, day and night.

My body is ignited, I'm now full of fire,
The fire of love won't let me sleep, oh my love.
Ever since you sent this precious flower,
My thoughts are all about you - everyday.

No one knows how I'm feeling right now,
The flame of marital fire has begun burning me.
This gift you have sent has stirred my entire being.
I'm emotionally elevated and delighted.

Please, I urge you come around and let's see.
I want to baptize you with unending love.
I will care for you without limit and be with you.
You're my spotlight, I want you to shine round me,

And keep brightening my dear heart and soul.
I've heard much of your courage and kindness,
You're a symbol of peace, peculiar and matchless!
I'll forever dive into the ocean of your love.

©® ONYINYECHI COSMOS ETU

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I am a sucker for a love poem. This is a bold profession of such laden with excellent metaphors.

Nice job,
Tim

Thanx for your kind and duly appreciative opinion upon my humble work !
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