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Far distant as in Life is death

Saturn is defined
by distance from earth

rare occurrences
are defined by Saturn...
planet assigned to death
more sadness
once in a way

life is else
most of the time
happy birthdays many

weddings of children
flowers and ornaments
sugar pastries.......

Grief comes
after many a years
It has to
be fatal
serious illness and debt
are inevitable

rest most chocolates
poets of whom
you are the tastiest

enjoy being on NEO
all poets you

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Free verse
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Not Explicit Content


Hi, Lovedly,
Poor Saturn. A gritty look at what is inevitable - illness, grief, debt, mixed in with weddings and flowers...and sugar pastries! Life and poetry, intertwined.
Thank you!

LAV kind thanks life is more of happiness
grief laced as tapestry

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