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Far Away from the MADDENING Crowd

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2019-03-23 16:12

crowd
yeah
silence
don't say it so
very loud
none will be proud

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Geezer

Sun, 2019-03-24 16:53

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some good poetry here, if you finish it! Come on, you know we need more that that. Give us the story! ~ Geezer.
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lovedly

Mon, 2019-03-25 08:45

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if GEE
you want me to
capture

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