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Eye Contact

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2020-01-28 11:54

She looked into
my eye

held it longer
for a while
more than three seconds
not done
unless for nightly fun
but none was done

so keep away from strangers' eye
many em vie
why feel shy

hold on for a while
in lovedly's style

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
they say eye contact is dangerous some may give inappropriate messages some invites how would one know
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

scribbler

Tue, 2020-01-28 14:48

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looked into just one of your eyes eh? Yeah those lying eyes. Nice fun poem

lovedly

Wed, 2020-01-29 02:44

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scribbler
and
Jerry
fun is life's
pun
we all still do
and
have since eons done
b merry have
++++++++++fun

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