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Drifting day by day
We lift our
errant eyes
waking up
to the blissful
bluebird skies.
Where there
dawns
another day
faintly
flickering
itself away .
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Lavender
Wed, 2022-09-14 19:54
Drifting Day by Day
Hello, Edward,
So gentle, peaceful, and calm. I know you are usually inspired by music. Is that the case with this?
Thank you,
L
Edward nigma
Wed, 2022-09-14 20:14
Yes it is my inspiration
https://youtu.be/f2cKAbqWMLg
The song gave me the idea
of how one day fades then bleeds back into another but I know wouldn’t last forever so you better enjoy each day to the fullest because don’t know when your final day will fade.
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Lavender
Wed, 2022-09-14 20:44
Beautiful!
Precious.
Thank you,
L
Geezer
Thu, 2022-09-15 11:53
How true...
you never know. I like the thought process here. Nice job! ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
Thu, 2022-09-15 15:01
Thank you
I try to give my advice or feelings thoughts within the form of my poems hoping it would build up an impact and be remembered . And I try to write it sincerely because it’s what I believe is the truth. Thank you geezer .
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.