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doggy my love

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2016-05-27 11:19

O you there
come and share
poetry I compose on pets
is very fair
but don't me with pets compare

I AM A LOVELY ONE
COME SMILE WITH ME

This is what I always
wanted to be
a pet for many a darling
as all would love to kiss me

O what a lovely feeling
they'd pet me
ruffle my hair
and

I would lick side by side
upon a hard sweet bone
they'd give me to
my mouth ride!.

Then into their bed
I'd also slide....

haahahahaaa
just come and see
selfie please.....

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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jane210660

Sun, 2016-06-05 03:59

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This made me smile out loud.
Have you ever met my faithful hound - Snoopy?
I think he wrote this :-)
Jx

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lovedly

Sun, 2016-06-05 08:14

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is snoopy a
he or she
where can we two meet

hahahahaaaaaa
your maiden visit
is a delight
lady

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jane210660

Sun, 2016-06-05 08:53

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Snoopy is a he. A bit of an old chap now, a mongrel from a rescue centre, crossed between a Staffie and Jack Russell. Interesting combo, possibly the most loving creature I've ever met. Your poem reminded me of the day we chose him. Only a puppy, he bought his little ball to show us and cried when we left. I picked him up a few days later when all the paperwork was done and apart from work etc, he has barely left my side since. Jx

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lovedly

Sun, 2016-06-05 13:28

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like snoopy

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