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does it thrill

They no longer get a thrill

in playing scrabble
crossing dots and dashes
they don't like chess
its slow and boring
neither do they like to play
Bridge or Rummy
it's not like Casinos ... BIG Gambling
they don't like to see what on screens/reels is happening
and want to do it in real life believing
so now their only pass time is to continue in war
all lure
every thing is fair in love and war
so they enjoy the part they seek all the more
no punishing award

so give the guys a chance
as you plotted them
see their sensibilities
have led to your composing poetry's
life is just like this
TIME PASS PLEASE
why about others worry
lovely is your thought of poetry
So many eat cookies pop corns
and crispy chips

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Comments

you have chosen a good theme here Lovedly perhaps goofed it by second stanza...in my opinion you could instead have spiced it up with the eccentricity of supposedly a powerful leader who insulted the Canadian PM and tried to ransack the recent G6+1 summit. Just my thought.
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raj (sublime_ocean)

plotted them
yeah
it was meant to say
PLANTED them....

and poets have to play verbally safe
lest some blast them
for wantonly
such guys can do anything
so i guess '
let it be it's only simplistic poetry

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