the word dawn repeated a lot.
I like the message thougb
Hello lovedly
Thanks for sharing.

two sips of coffee and a smoke
B sleeping a ton of work ahead
First poem read
and
read it through and yes there
is Dawn
like to me waking up finally
looked at this
and been playing a lot of
fallout4 soundtrack
and going over the nuke
times...ads...radio announcements
and remember post fifty sixties
muskoka radio
yes..they still played downtown
and summerplace
even unto the eighties
but

i sang this poem aloud
down here
we love hard rock here
and i love techno
heard brittaneys toxic
the cleaning staff girls
down that long Overlook
hallway at the Voy

but i sang your poem
its like a jingle or ditty
my dreams were of back
to work with difference
i watched amerageddon
movie....loved the work
hangar for the drill rig
they were making
so probably got prompted
and i liked the morning
staff scene in the movie
Kontrol from budapest

memories are useful
as we age
and im still not whole yet
from the binges
they were doozies
why im not using lately
and need stay away
one day at a time

but using dawn as the
almost baptical fever
like they did in some
of the church crowds
i attended too for awhile
yes i tried much...
cults..catholic times
not for long
never did service work
and moved out again
back to the woods
never forgetting my
ancestors of the land

but re reading it with
this sing song approach
and school days
where my first social
training began
it brought back
memories

for me anyway
poems are such
not to take rulas
critique away
for I find her to be
a most romantic
and realist
and love her work

thank U all

happy to be a Neopoet
cause today i am happy
thank
U

Mr W

lends itself to song
Im always singing
a habit from my mother during
housework of all things..
vacum whirling away
and Sarah Vaughan or Frank Sinatra
cranked extreme...

love media....many said i should
have done voice work via the college
up here....too busy with the fam and
the lah lah lands through time..
nice of them to express to me that
I was good enough though
and I have a pleasant singing
voice...
and enjoy music greatly..

a bow back
Lovedly

Mr Wolf!