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Dark Ere Dawn.
They say
there's a lull before the storm
I overheard some one say
it's darkest before dawn
I retaliated man
Are you talking of my
Loveliest Dawn
he blurted
the one ere the sunrise
I smiled I'd never seen one
as I sleep till
SUN'S NOON
So what will I know of nature's dawn
why mourn before the morn
light will come be sure then you may search
what
your gone
dawn .
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
TWO DAWNS MORN AND MINE BOTH GONE SINCE LONG
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Fri, 2022-02-25 11:16
dear lovedly
this is both charming and thoughtful. I admire it much!
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Fri, 2022-02-25 12:53
thanks a lot
ma'am Cats