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a cup of tea

A cup of tea

keep hot water ready
as global warming here keeps pace
they will pack my brand of tea
you may share in space
but it's too vast a place

in the universe
no venturing God
can keep trace

let's thus on earth embrace
ere our footfalls don't keep pace

we may land in sheer disgrace
at eternities hollow empty trace
if we can't without seeing here
each other trace
we may be considered as two poets
far out of place
trying to futilely embrace

let's together on Neo
as long as we can go
keep bound our shoe .
then we may party too

of course
boldlyface to face!

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get yer running shoes on, as you will have to keep up with my motorized Zimmer frame, while I zip through the un published and published works here.
We need a direction here, I think that there has been two of late the Renga's by Barbara and Wesley's workshop. giving us one subject to write of.
It is good to see others takes on one subject.
OK, OK, I will wait along the way with a cup of tea lol,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

has been valued less
I shan't now comment
I now confess

Why did they want me to
their theories accept
You wonder on my behalf Ian

but a cup of coffee with you
I'll partake

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you see,
i always have
a glass of tea
for more quantity
as its quality
is agreeable to me
and my family
we are all tea drinkers here
the time of the day, doesn't matter

Alid

cold we all love hottttttttttzz of cofffffffffffeeeeeeeeee

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Ok you can have Coffee if you wish, Maybe we could have a meet with Esker in that Café he frequents, but the young lady there says he hasn't been in for a while and she misses him.
I shall send one of my friends to find him.
They have come back to me and say he has been seen by a lakeside somewhere in Canada, well that makes it easy doesn't it lol.
He is very sensitive and is what we would call a seeker of dreams, where the life of the lone wolf, is to the wolf his destiny, but that is not true they forget that life itself is not a fixed pattern.
You Loved know of this, and as you wade through the minds corridors, you know that there are many probability tracts we can take, or are you a purist that thinks that time now and always is fixed for us as mere humons.
Take care young Bard there is a warp in the very structure we rely on that will awake us to many things, lol.
Have a great night and let me know where you are I may need a favour ???
Yours as always, J Sparrow

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

no vice
only sodden rice
brew it makes beer
heat it it becomes
cooked rice
my dear
eat it
even on a lonely street
may be there Esker
you may meet

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The cup was for Loved I know how you would like your tea, In a glass with no sugar.
A fond memory of the Sauk's of the Middle East, there I spent an hour or two in the spice market, also where they sold Gold and silks from all over the world, my friends Dhow had twin diesel engines, that could throw it through the waters of the Red sea until they boiled, the fun of the outboard toilet lol.
I think that Digit is on the move I saw him with an air ticket with the Royal Brunei Airways emblem on it, I wonder where he is going, I know he said he would be at the liberty bell on the 3rd of November to give you a chance, maybe he is teasing you.
Take care and watch out for him,
Yours J Sparrow

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I'm afraid you're mistaken. Its less sugar, not no sugar.lol. an't imagine drinking a sugarless tea, old friend. Its just not happening.

Alid

I'm afraid you're mistaken. Its less sugar, not no sugar.lol. an't imagine drinking a sugarless tea, old friend. Its just not happening.

Alid

Ok sweet lips just for you a grain of sugar or two, all are symbolic as when there we have no need to eat or drink, the thought is to make a familiar scene to make you feel at ease lol.
Take care see you soon, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Ian
what tea can do
bring closer
soles
two

next one should be on
shoe size
ok
S O L E S
and not ur kinds

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