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Creation
All the countless stars
Flashed into their existence
Born of our climax
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2023-01-18 00:33
Haiku
It’s 5/7/5.
Jackweb
Wed, 2023-01-18 06:27
Capitalization!!!
Capitalization is another way haiku is different from traditional poetry. This poetry form does not require the writer to capitalize. While you can capitalize, it is not required.
Very impressive! Well done!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Words.unwritten
Wed, 2023-01-18 07:08
Beautiful words as always tim
Beautiful words as always tim x
Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2023-01-18 07:35
Aww
Thank you as always.
Geezer
Wed, 2023-01-18 09:29
Just one comment...
Damn! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2023-01-18 11:49
hey Tim,
good work!
*hugs, Cat
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When someone reads your work
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And reply in kind, thanks.
Seren
Thu, 2023-01-19 13:24
Sigh Tim!!! Wow!!!!
This is magnificent. You're an amazing poet and I feel honoured I get to read your work. I'm so glad I came back!!!
I've missed this immensely.
Kind regards Jayne x
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Rosewood Apothecary
Thu, 2023-01-19 13:26
You flatter me
Which will get you very far. Smiles.
Thank you for reading
Thank you for your kindness
Tim