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Crap poet says he ...for me
My master after reading this said
I was a CRAP poet .
You bless my confidence
I admire positive folks like you
have read some of your works too
Beautiful
Hardly a poet.
hoping to be one
some day
one day
if not today
Let my Master say
what he may
by now all know
he condemns more
than one count
on ones fingers
Still we pray for his
invaluable criticism
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Geezer
Tue, 2017-03-07 12:35
Lovedly...
I love your lowly demeanor! The only thing you are a slave to is your 'chutzpa' [arrogant exuberance]. Don't ever change! ~ Gee
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lovedly
Tue, 2017-03-07 13:11
Kindness Geezer
Narcissism is my axe
it keeps me axed
I am a born poet
never schooled
so I compose poetry
as seeds from my tool
brains seeds only
how it happens
no one knows
but it ensues
and
me pursues
thanks to your chutzpah elixir
lovedly
Wed, 2017-03-08 03:57
crap what!!!!!!
its so wonderful reading you all
I could compose one page poetry
ere I stall
some one will call me
CRAP
someone may come to slap
but I am so happy
still thousands daily fall at my lap
no they don't slip
that's what is off my map
But when one seeks perfection only
he needs a big wrap
and
bury his muse along with him
six feet below
or
hang him on the roof top
so that the world would know.
Poet what!