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confused wandering nomad poet

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2016-02-01 21:04

sometimes I wonder

why do we walk
and
not fly high up in the sky
and
even if no one does not read us
why feel so shy
they will at least see us fly high
a flag of Neos in hand
to be like a present from this wonderful site
will do
and
poetry coming in print some day
all will say why
did LOVEDLY
fly away

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Geremia

Tue, 2016-02-02 15:51

Geremia's picture

It is a losing battle, my friend. This is WORKSHOP site. Jusr keep posting. You will leave your special mark. I post as long as I can--no expectations.

Richard for Joe

lovedly

Tue, 2016-02-02 18:08

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tell Joe
let him know
his poetry above heavens does flow
as we only on earth
like a flickering candle half heartedly glow
and Joe will know
coming from me
glory be for him only
kindly!
that he reads me
and
replies me too
what more expectations
can I have
tell me will you
O Sir joe

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Geremia

Tue, 2016-02-02 19:00

Geremia's picture

Oh, I know, dear friend.

joe [himself :) ]

lovedly

Tue, 2016-02-02 21:35

lovedly's picture

flawless typing
you will be okay Joe
keep taking medicines
meditate also
meditation can be performed. anywhere at anytime
just repeat what ur mind likes most
ten 20 times concentration is needed
I was given 3 months for nervous finals .....xxxx-----
and that was 20 years ago
I still live

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Geremia

Wed, 2016-02-03 08:19

Geremia's picture

I am not doing most of typing.thanks.

Geezer

Wed, 2016-02-03 10:08

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always read. I just don't comment if I don't have any constructive criticism. Yes, keep writing, ~ Gee

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

lovedly

Wed, 2016-02-03 12:12

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but just a sweet hi
will show u came by

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