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conDomising compUters soonLIE

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2016-02-19 14:10

computers love each other
when operated
by gals and guys
but
all first letters must wear caps
like condoms
else compy will not lay
one flat
without a hat
not knowing
this one from that

but the English spell check tells me
you are at times speaking
in English
phew
some times USA
and at times UK
R U GAY!
Answer me quickly!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Seren

Fri, 2016-02-19 14:46

Seren's picture

Thats a bit rough .. YOU asking people if they lie ..

Lmfao !!!

Lovedly .. your the last person to ask that question you cant even say who you are, tbh I am long past caring and wondering

But seriously ?? Oh and your back to comments as poems

I'll be back when you return to a poetic turn ;)

Jayne

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

lovedly

Fri, 2016-02-19 15:50

lovedly's picture

I shall be a non entity
as my worth is never
recognised

as Anony
1000 read me
and
you also care once in a way
that I admire you Jayne
all my righteous way
so as an Aussie
friend do stay

you will come to know me
some day
one day
if not today

MY POEM

You place God last
and
call him best

Mother always comes first
then all the rest
God is second best
friends when in laps
you wish to rest

and without a lover
there is no life
how will you produce?
kids and be a wife

just hold friends
hands only
live and love
with one only

God Bless thee
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