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Compose Messsagerial Poetry

Life begins from the seed
once planted
emerges as a flower
lives like a rose for ever
then merges in library books
in pages
as times memory
who was he//she!

''We never think of our departure too!'' -----some one said this

No this is wrong
we all nearing the cemetery
think of it
knowing fully,
well the time has come
but we,
most of us wonder
about those who we leave behind

what will happen to them
and
would they continue
as candles flickering
in the wild tsunami c wind
wanting to follow along

as the last journey
can only be accomplished
by all
and
alone

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Nice!

IRiz

Irene
your nice
melts all my ice

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Even if you are alone, there in some hidden place are those that know thy name and will call you to join them.
Good write young Bard, as you will say you need to read mine lol,
Yours as always, Ian..

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

missed u so much
Ian

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