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Communion of Flesh

Lust seductively rests
solemnly on my tongue,
communion of the flesh
begins under a finger

beads of sweat break
free of bodies of heat,
running effortlessly
on glistening breasts

a curling between toes
grips counted linen,
rasping against cheeks
ruddy from exertion

Saliva shimmers lips
parted and panting,
and drying tongues
search rivers of relief

an ecstasy of knowing
screams its release,
begging for anchor
yet arching to flight

broad shoulders ripple
taking the strain,
encompassing a bud
he pulls to attention

massaging out longing
and pearlescent need,
thrilled to a frenzy
I am lost to passion

forever in the moment
free, of restraint

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level: 
Explicit Content

Comments

this is spectacular in structure and content. your language usage is such that makes one study the under current! there is so much that you aren't saying but only hinting at. and it is most seductive! I love the pictures this brings to mind...excellent job of tasteful erotica.

*love, Cat
*ever, eddy

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I am so chuffed you like it I know many won't see this one, I was encouraged to post it. Thanks for the visit and the excellent comment. I am going to the undiscovered poems and read a couple before I hit the sack its after 5am here and I need my 3 hrs sleep. Hope you're doing well and it's not too cold there it's really hot here tonight I am melting but I've got the air-con on before the sun comes up.

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