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Colder

She is colder than
Most with emotions.
With her it's just going
Through the motions.

Her womanly ways and
Perfect figure.
No hesitation when she
Pulls the trigger.

Her tan skin and
Dark eyes.
BEWARE! A word
To the wise.

Her full lips,
Her long fingernails.
She is 100%
Bone-a-fide female.

You smile when you
See her look.
You're guessing, she is
A closed book.

Her radiant smile sets
You at ease.
The way she moves,
With expertise.

She is at her weakest
In the morning.
She never prepares when
She hears the warning.

No matter what,
A smile on her face.
It's like she has
Fallen from grace.

You can envy her
Lack of attention.
Easy going, calm,
No sign of tension.

No emotions show
In her eyes.
No hint of confusion,
Or look of surprise.

She is not stuck-up
Doesn't brag or boast.
Be careful,
She is colder than most.

Turbo1904 ♥

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Structured: Western
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Comments

that you know my sister!!! only she is a sociopath so you might not want to get too close ;) her name is "Stormy".

Hugs, Cat

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Hi my friend. Your sister too. I wonder why people are like that. Did someone do something to these people? Puzzles me to this day. I just want someone that does what they say they're doing. Be real, be honest, it really is for the best. Not such a hard concept to get. Oh well, it takes all kinds....

Best Wishes,
Turbo1904

author comment

I don't get them either! we had the same parents so it probably isn't genetic. I don't get the expression "Born Bad" either, but she was. dangerous to those around her, too, got me hurt and almost dead a couple of times when we were children. she was four years older. the oldest sister was a waste, too, grew up to be a priss and a hoarder. what I wouldn't have given for a brother!

hugs, Cat

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I have known a few like that! I do believe that most of them that show little to no emotion, are practiced at the art of deception.
In reality, they are confused and upset with the rest of the world. They choose to avoid letting anyone know and can't bear to be thought of as clueless. Of course, there are those that really are emotionally disturbed and really don't have any real emotions because there is something missing. I found your piece straight-forward and well written. Your rhyming is good and the thoughts are clear. Nice! ~ Geezer.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

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