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THE CHRISTMAS LETTER

We maintain the struggle
it’s almost the same one
as in all our previous year.
We continue to persevere
in much the same ways
since February.

We have survived, somehow.
That virus left us alone
to contemplate how we did it
with eyes wide open.
Our families ever more
important than any moments before.

Last January is forgotten
lost amongst the detritus
of infections, deaths, finger-pointing.
Time, noting it’s losses, continues
so even despite all of that
time heals, forgives, and passes.

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And Merry Christmas!

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time does forgive and heal and no one stops the march of time... it passes." The Christmas Letter " sounds like something that you would send to a dear friend or relative. ~ Geez.
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