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Cherry Flavored Antacids

The rush of that day.

The door opened that I didn’t even know had been built.

I haven’t been the same since that day.

I keep wondering what you were thinking that day.

I keep wishing I could see into your brain.

I so desperately want to know what you think of me.

What went through your mind when we talked for hours.

What happened from then to now.

To go back to that.

My friends think it silly,
Pitiful even.

I wish I could go back to that day,
And fall in love all over again

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this is one of the better love poems I've read :)

*hugs, Cat

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Fantastic romantic poem.
Deeply written from the heart.
Emotive, evocative and longing.

Beautiful!
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