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chain of life
From youth to childhood
then manhood
entwined with another in mind
we travel forth with dignity
hand in hand
what a lively romance
does our quality of life enhance
we dance to tunes of glory
and make up or own life's story
with another childhood
in the womb
then as we grow old and aged
as said Shakespeare
we become sans, sans, sans
and life has had its worthiest dance
death waits all not perchance
it is human existence’s romance
come life is what it is see
just a prance merry
some come with glory
some go with a life so gory
but then all live a life of their own
why moan
love and life we all have known
come and go
from unknown to another unknown
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
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Comments
alidzain
Wed, 2016-04-20 12:48
loved
Good one.
Alid
lovedly
Wed, 2016-04-20 15:27
thank u
u loved this one
from loved
Sparrow
Wed, 2016-04-20 18:42
Loved
A natural write from your quill, good to see that you can still turn those better ones out..
Where is everyone, You comment, then a week or so until others notice Neo seems a bit sparse of comments at the moment.
Take care young Bard and once again a good write, Yours Ian..
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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Wed, 2016-04-20 19:35
as the birds fly away
as the birds fly away
we all come home to stay
our nests are far away
who can say
which one will be our home
today
the next day or days far away
neopoets will continue to stay
for a long way
a path way now lonely
may be one of spring another day
life so simply ebbs away
who can for ever stay
do say