this is a delightful piece! the title is okay. but the body of the poem sings! it flows really well. it is a subject that I had never considered before...I love that you wrote about this from the Iron pan's perspective. you carried it off so whimsically. great work! (I love your imagination)

*hugs, Cat

Apt yet very beautiful ! I love haiku poetry. It refrain from too many words and phrases. Thus, it is considered important to leave subtle overtones of haiku to the reader's own interpretation.

In sum, haiku represent the beauty of simplicity.

Traditionally, haiku is of three lines
the first and third lines are of five syllables
and the second is seven. But, we are not speaking
of traditional Haiku, and the restraints do not apply.

I like it as it is and purely for the differences from
regular poetry. As you have said; "It was good practice all the way around."

I did notice that you stuck to a meter of 6-6-8, [mostly].

There is one place where you did not.

"Chicken is thrown to the pan" -7
All-in-all, still very enjoyable, and it made me hungery earlier than lunch-time!
[Of course it doesn't take much these days!] Good stuff, ~ Geezer.
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