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brenda

My blessing came into my life
Regrets are my history
Always their decisions
Of wrong and right
The ease of every conflict
Between her and I
The sex
Melts the tears! The conflicts with an everlasting kiss at night
My blessing is now a movement that my body will not hide
The sex
Is one way a man should love his wife

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lucky me..i knew top alpha wolves..........
and streetsters just hanging on
old married warren couples
pleasure is nice....
then money biz........
living lone is not an excuse..means U
just cant socialize and work with anyone
a fragment level
not me man. i worked with tons of
women..
bank managers to ex strippers hookers
and dudes with family holdings..
delta riders i call those boys
verandahs...sipping ice tea
while mortality pulls them under
the waves..eg..diabetes..heart
issues.....
me..i shove it on the bike..
walk....starve..its healthy
deal with epic shit kicking women
keeps the business edge sharp
and put tons of my small coin
into clothing which the brass level
like......like today....bought a coffee
for my bank manager lady who
thinks im the cats meow
from the barista woman who
showed a hollywood lady..andi mcdowell
? how to grind make her coffee...
holliwood is always up here of late
and our city just goes..meh...we are
a city of actors..intellectuals
like rome.....like greece and its ampitheatres

but I see your poem
its nice when you can work as a couple
and satisfy your circle of selves
and move into the big traffic of commuters
going somewhere

I tried it...had it....but..
I loved the alpha females who took top alpha
males..intelligence
operatives
so on that level its teams
world wide right now
my intel women via their intel men
who love the intel women....
I can punch in names..google
tag...bring me files history
on my world...

I could be writing more trying poetry
but just hold it to the little world
wordings here

but I dream of the little wifey good
hubby thing.....but im more then
that.....
still...i know wifey good hubby teams
they like me....ive spent time r and r
with a lot of people
i just dig in.do maintenance
paint houses..rake lawns
wire up old electrical..paint rooms
enliven....
mr uncle wolf talent...

if U can love your wife unabashed
straight up...thats fantastic...
all mine asks is that respect
which I just gave her
cause theres tons of the
string pullers...
nothing wrong with that
......
could write thesis upon thesis
............
i loved the title
I know a few Brendas
and it was
Achilles who loved his woman
Helena of Troy
....
but..if U can love the one ur with
and accept the one u want
is just a pipe dream
all the more..

my little woman is so happy
I am just complying to her
she is super smart
super rebellious
she never clipped my wings
fifteen years she held out
knowing that one day
this bad ass would come
in with the dinner ticket
in his wolfish fangs
and deposit it in in
her hands....

trust.....

great poem...
brought all this out of me
why I love poetry..
and your poetry is earnest
and honest
..
thank U

w

Esker ! wow that was a lot to read but I'm happy if my poem got some blood to flow and thanks for your response , this poem was about my own clarity [ my blessing ]

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Consideration is another. Never make decisions without consultations. A woman has a right to feel valued.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

OK keith straight to the point ! our ages are the 50s and 60s . You said Never make decisions without consultations. A woman has a right to feel valued. My girlfriend feels valued when the lovemaking is the foreplay and that's not physical but it has to be constant [ a kiss, a hug , telling her that I love her or even dying her hair which I have done several times . My point is this what puts a smile on her face is this . In her mind is she still desirable to me . Keith at our age they don't want lovemaking they want long hard core sex [ within reason nothing crazy or maybe ] she want to be satisfied . Woman use this as a barometer to check if they are still desirable [ example baby am I gaming weight , do I look good in this dress ] . So when I said sex is one way a man should love his wife ! this is what I mean .

Now Keith you are not alone . When you said you don't lie ! I say this almost every day so you have friends who feels the same way you feel like me . but loneness is a decision made form a choice

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Sex is one way a man should love his wife. I merely suggested another and I don't think your response is a hundred miles away from my meaning. Possibly I could have been clearer.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

ok keith lets write a poem together the man and the sex . I think this will be fun . you write a line than I write a line . I will start it off
Sexuality is a war
this is a battle
the love
the hate
the touch you need more
[you write the next lines]

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the axis of your life.
From her to have your faith restore,
the end of pointless strife.

So listen to the heart that beats

Over to you...
write in your own style, whether it be free verse or whatever.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

Is the truth
That cannot be ignored
This battle between love and war!
Builds a foundation
For passion trust to Endure

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Is the truth
That cannot be ignored
This battle between love and war!
Builds a foundation
For passion trust to Endure

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[So listen to the heart that beats] I don't no how to fit this line into are flow it changed the music . but so far I think this poem between us is great . I cant wait to put it online

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So listen to the heart that beats
and for your loving yearns,
thus the pull of life completes
with lust for your return.

No single thought should be denied
when flame of love is hot,
share whatever she replied
content to be thus caught.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

I love your direction with that line [So listen to the heart that beats] so will we call this piece finish
and if so I have to say this was fun as hell and I look forward to doing this again and who will post it you or me

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which agrees well with what we both said here. When first I was married my wife complained to some friends that I never told her that I loved her. The reply; he says it all the time in everything he does for you without your having to ask.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

when it come down your wife I would say I have been married twice Keith I had too atone for my past sins only with my first wife I cheated . with my second wife my atonement was how I talked to her
keith I went so many year without love or sex this is when I started writing . but god wanted something from me and this was my atonement . he wanted me to love myself god wanted me to make peace with the chapters in my life

so look we can write a poem about this

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I came from a very dysfunctional family. You can put that very in capitals and bold and it would not be strong enough. I also found that as a gentleman in my part of the world (central Scotland) the females of my own age were not interested. They liked the "treat 'em mean, keep 'em keen" brigade. I had no choice but to widen my horizons and finally married a somewhat older woman. I never regretted my choice. Now as to the poem, do you wish to start or should I?
PS: I'm a natural rhymer but if you prefer free verse I think these differences can only add to the appeal of the finished work.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

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