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Bottle -Up -2020 (NEW TREND POEM)

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2019-12-30 11:10

Be ready
to fill old wine
in newer plastic bottles

as New Year is pushing forth
through the labyrinth of sorts
(you may say Time)
to emerge from its cocoon

and

when 2020 does finally arrive
treat it as a boon

another year to play
one yearer’s match
so soon

THEN
return my Good wishes
A VERY HAPPY YEAR POET
lovedly

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Geezer

Tue, 2019-12-31 05:40

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I want to see better than that for the new year! ~ Gee.
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lovedly

Tue, 2019-12-31 06:59

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you'd appreciate it
had you played one dayer's in Cricket

LOL HAPPY NEW YEAR
just as you wish it
2 B

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Geezer

Tue, 2019-12-31 12:30

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I accept your wishes for the new year and send you my own to you and yours. ~ Gee.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

lovedly

Wed, 2020-01-01 02:02

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No need to sir
among poets we are all equal
You much better than most
and a friend too
rgds lovedly

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