I see you have reached way down inside of you. into the dark rooms where no natural light can penetrate. the rooms there vary... some are oppressive and silent as most graves. others, you can hear screams and crying. in the worst there is praying...

I much enjoyed being taken there. wonderful language and imagery, oh the imagery...

*ever, eddy styx
*hugs, Cat

may he burn brightly and give off warmth, lol!

is what I'm talking about! The boys are dancing a jig! Killer is anticipating the end
and it will be spectacular! The twisting and muffled screams! She is magnificent and she is welcome to visit the boys for the weekend and barbecue anytime! They can cook something up! LoL
~ Geez.
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I was wondering if we’d see some of this again. Of course it’s not my predilection but I enjoy when other writers tackle it. I don’t watch horror or read that genre so it’s always a good place to look for different subject matter. Great job with this as usual.

Tim

Hey, I starting going through and listening to Clutch. As it turns out I’m fairly familiar with their first album. High School, piece of shit cars, driving around listening to cassette tapes. When I listen to that album I was transported to my buddy’s ‘86 Monte Carlo where he played that album on repeat for half my junior year. I’m actually kinda fond of the newer recordings as I find the vocal style more to my liking. The early recordings have a far reaching influence on many of my current favorite bands especially that guitar tone. Overwound pickups and Marshall amps. I’ll keep going through their stuff. Excellent lyrics of course!

Hello, Carrie,
Whoa! Definitely chilled me to the bone - well done!
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Damn! This was so full of rage, and revenge, that it made for a devastatingly awesome piece to contemplate. I've written a couple like this myself, and so I can relate to the dark place where this comes from. But, it's better to do as you have done, and as I have done. Take and turn that hurt, that sharp pain into something constructive that may help lessen those stinging inner-wounds somewhat. I hope that was the case for you after writing this, my friend.

Regardless, it is one truly grand and imaginative work.

I loved it.

Thanks for sharing.

I loved your poem. Many times I have had thoughts like this, they scare me as well but still are in our emotions real or not

I know very little about poetic form, but this was an awesome delivery of intense, extremely intense emotion.
I loved it also! I totally undersood it, i think, but don't really know why. Great job!

I'll call you rose if that's okay. I am impressed by the intensity of your writing and your ability to
put those feelings into words. If you don't want me to call you Rose, tell me. It's an easy mistake
to rectify!