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blindness overcomes darkness here 'tis ignorance

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2016-03-25 14:15

LIFE IS A BLIND MANS SEARCH AND LOVE.... TO KNOW MORE
Love is an endless
blind man’s journey
many seek it on the internet
as those guys make money

you lap off some from your lap’s top
some honey
some guys love only to be funny

as on laps top they can suck
yet pay no money

I have found more than a dozen sonny
I show them theirs only

go find in your jungles and roads
maybe lakes and dive for a fish
perhaps you may be able
to get your wanted loving bed dish

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Esker

Fri, 2016-03-25 14:49

Esker's picture

tis true....the net is a catcher of all!
and big business the trade of trading

thank U!

lovedly

Fri, 2016-03-25 17:47

lovedly's picture

I just made friends
with another
Ontario poet

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lovedly

Fri, 2016-03-25 18:33

lovedly's picture

We all strive for a life time
and love keeps us alluding
all the time
where is the figuring in
of true and intrinsic love
all look forwards to the one
where only they can climb
but in
such love is intrusive
all know
young kids get struck down deep below
so many do not even come to know
what evil lies below
so in love manure of consolation do so
and keep in search of love also

I have passed a life since
in search still I lay in lurch
of loves verse in poetic converse
will I ever find such a love
tell me any one here
down below or from above
what really is intense love...

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