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BLIND, DEAF OR DUMB which you prefer
hearing !
well in my time twas
HIS MASTERS CHOICE
Who is the master I asked
none would tell me
I didn't bother
as i could hear
from London to Paris
now I ask the next door guy
what did i say
so to stay deaf
now I pray
why bray
as we all here are gay
sorry gray!
now have
Your say.....
Iam deaf anyway
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
alidzain
Wed, 2015-02-11 04:21
loved
if the title is a question, my answer is none. lol.
last line "Iam" should be "I am" or I'm".
Alid
mand
Wed, 2015-02-11 04:32
Hi Loved
I know I wouldn't like to be blind! but I have a feeling that it's what I will get in my old age! - though none are a happy prospect :)
Nice one Loved
Love Mand xxxx