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BIGFOOT YEARS

Once I was a younger guy
not yet thirty years of age
with no appreciation for my youth.
A foolish youth on life's fresh stage.

Fate brought to me a place to hunt.
I now realize how special this place was
though at the time I had no clue
as I consumed life without pause.

There dwelt upon this remote place
a huge buck, Bigfoot was his name
which I sought for many years.
The years went by, he never came,

Others saw him but not me
yet his signatures were everywhere:
destroyed saplings almost trees
large pawed out breed scrapes here and there.

While seeking this ghost I never saw
I saw other deer and learned a lot
and like my companions gathered lesser deer
but Bigfoot was never shot.

Until one season he was...gone,
perhaps the victim of old age
and with him went his mystery
preserved now only on this page.

Now a near life time from that place
where I've not set foot since it was sold,
when hunting I still think of him
perhaps because I'm growing old.......

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in my time we had a SNOWMAN
none did ever see
till like yours he also vanished

the funsters....
had changed the game
must have happened to
BIGFOOT the same
stay at ur game

One of the great things about deer hunting is the way a large buck which can't be killed assumes a near legendary status. In a way I'm not sad that he died of natural causes.....stan

author comment

who gives a shit that the scansion sucks in a few places? I really enjoyed this one and I can relate to it perfectly. ~ Gee.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

My scansion suck? what a shock lol. Not to worry though as I'll clean this up over time so that the heart of the poem will be the same but it won't grate so badly. Thanks for the visit......stan

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in a few places. ~ Gee.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

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