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be that beautiful butterfly )))))menore edit))))))
A beautiful butterfly
has the privilege of entry
to any nectarish orifice
let it be planty
flowery
butter fly
will love to there die
even if it be a candle flame
butterflies love
the burning game
and put all humans
to tearful shame
are you now
at least game
O! what a shame
just hide your name....
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Comments
Geremia
Tue, 2016-02-23 14:11
we shall see. read message
we shall see. read message left on my post today, dear friend
[Richard]
lovedly
Tue, 2016-02-23 16:16
which post Joe???
couldn't find one
kindly post again
thanks
Geremia
Tue, 2016-02-23 16:26
THE CHOSEN
THE CHOSEN
Sparrow
Wed, 2016-02-24 19:23
Loved
One of my children here calls me Papillon, so I do know of the ways of the butterfly, in one of my pieces I was on the wings of a butterfly, they are the fluttering beauty of think as well as bring an insect.
Henri Charrière, called "Papillon," for the butterfly tattoo on his chest, was convicted in Paris in 1931 of a murder he did not commit. Sent to Devils Island, a good read if you have time..
Good write young one, I will try to be more attentive from now,
Yours, Ian..
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Wed, 2016-02-24 20:31
when butterflies decide
when butterflies decide
to fly from plant to plant
'tis then they only kisses supplant
and a new cocoon emerges
also as stamens and pollen bask
in the sun
a sunflower has just been seeded
O lucky one
we all human are
sons of a gun
fired into an oven