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BDSM

I want you to hurt me, make me feel pain
Inflict all your hurt onto me
Let this agony become my joy
Use me, abuse me like an unwanted toy

I need you to hurt me, make me scream out
Focus all your hurt into me
Let this torture become my desire
Use me & abuse me, harder & faster

Bondage & Discipline
Make me sore, break me in

Dominance & Submission
Every fetish, every sin

Sadism & Masochism
Make me bleed, break my skin

I want you to hurt me, make me scream out
Direct all your hurt into me
Let this discomfort become my love
Use me, abuse me until you’ve had enough

I need you to hurt me, make me feel pain
Impose all your hurt into me
Let this torment become my delight
Use me & abuse me with malice & spite

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
I'm not personally into BDSM but a good friend of mine is. I was totally fascinated by the whole subject & had to pen something. Enjoy!
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

do you know if your friend was abused as a child? a physically or sexually abused person can feel that they deserve being hurt and even turn it into pleasure. your poem is very good an begins to hit on the philosophy of bondage/discipline sado/masochism which really messes with the mind. sometimes people who suffer from either are unable to love or receive love in a healthy capacity. good poem, I'd like to learn more.

*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy

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I never discussed my friend's childhood regarding abuse which may have caused their attraction to BDSM. I'll bring it up as he is very open about it. I'll let you know.

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"with all that I am & all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me"

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having never experienced this myself I can't comment on whether it is ok. I guess if it's between consenting adults then it's ok if both agree on what it to happen. I'd rather they did this under mutual agreement than not. BDSM does have to always be actual physical pain, it can incorporate just being tied up or even humiliation.

As for it being sick...not sure I agree, it's just not for me but if pleasure is gained from it, it's just someone's enjoyment. Plenty of other forms of sexual experiences that could be classed as sick. I guess someone may see foot fetish as sick, we all see things from different viewpoints.

Sick or not, it is enjoyed by many & 100's of clubs worldwide that specialise in this theme. You won't find me there though!!

Thanks for reading & commenting - I had hoped it would create some discussion.

regards

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"with all that I am & all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me"

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I feel that it is sick, too. not as in THAT'S SICK!!! as a condemnation, but "that is sick" is in sympathetic and needs a doctor's help.

love, Sis

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