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The Autumnal fever

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2021-10-16 22:34

Wow,Autumn once again is here
what a lovely season
for all poets so dear

what a beautiful fall
you relay
here it’s raining,
then a bit cloudy
sunnier later
during day

the clouds show anger
but quietly pass away
wonderful trees
leaves,
so colorfully display
my what hues
I wish I could show you
wait
I’ll fetch my camera
for you

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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scribbler

Sat, 2021-10-16 23:35

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autumn is by my reckoning the most beautiful time of year. Nice poem

lovedly

Sun, 2021-10-17 00:33

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But this time
winter entered first
sun forgot to come

so autumn was banged
thank urself not hanged
it's coming in
off and on with a bang
leaves must switch
lol

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Geezer

Sun, 2021-10-17 08:02

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as your work is this time, I still see the beauty. ~ Gee.
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lovedly

Sun, 2021-10-17 11:36

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dis joint me
GEE

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lovedly

Mon, 2021-10-18 15:07

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Geeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Geezer

Tue, 2021-10-19 08:41

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the sharp, cool breeze and smelled the damp air, while my eyes saw the colors that rival the rainbow! ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Tue, 2021-10-19 12:57

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Gee

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