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AUTUMN...2022
Autumn comes to all living beings
including animals birds and bees...
albeit timed differently,
but season's autumns
are more or less
timed
this year's autumn was different
it missed time...
winter came around
rather suddenly
after a while autumn
again took over the siege
hear me
just let me play
with my colorful leaves
let me enlighten thee...
I am autumn
know all ye
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lovedly
Mon, 2022-11-07 06:35
so nice of you Mark
your visit was a delight
thanks
do hope ya'll come
more often
author commentGeezer
Mon, 2022-11-07 09:30
I see that...
Autumn is hanging in there. I wouldn't mind if it hung around for a while yet. I see you playing with the colors of Fall, you are dressed in yellows and oranges, and spreading cheer all around. Not your usual somber mood! Nice work! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Mon, 2022-11-07 10:51
Not your usual somber mood! ...Nice work! ~ Geez.
Not your usual ''somber ''mood! Nice work! ~ Geez.
O NO I get misunderstood
not my fault
ONE ----A NON ENGLISH GUY WAS ASKED ....
WHAT HE UNDERSTOOD
was meant as
''MISUNDERSTOOD ''
La la he laughed
no probs
....a miss standing under the bridge
waiting for him ....her's ah!
author commentLavender
Mon, 2022-11-07 09:49
Autumn...2022
Hello, Lovedly,
I recently read a short poem about "playing" - "...the real joy in life comes in its play." Which is in doing anything we love apart from profit, compulsion, or sense of duty. This poem affirms that feeling for me, remembering the animals, birds and bees. And the playfulness with the colorful leaves. I really like the final line - a great invitation: the best way to know fall, is to experience and play with it.
Thank you,
L
lovedly
Sat, 2022-11-12 04:25
GLAD YOU HEARD ME ...LAV
hear me
just let me play
with my colorful leaves
let me enlighten thee...
I am autumn
know all ye
author commentlovedly
Fri, 2022-12-02 11:06
Thanks for reading AUTUMN ONE
Second will follow tomorrow So hang on lol don't hang...
today's quota gone in flames
all love to with me
play games ha ha..haaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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