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ASSURANCE...

I speak no more
just to lure
want to know me
First be sure

Wilderness
and
Loneliness
are
not ashore

Speak no more
but do persist
your love is
more
much more

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

And you’re right, everyone is watching football. I’m absolving myself from the emotional attachment to my NFL team to pursue artsy fartsy thingums

Tim

are metaphors...lol

author comment

Hello, Lovedly.
You paint in an abstract style, but with a defined, precise meaning. "Wilderness and Loneliness are not ashore." The words emit a feeling of loss, as if they're out to sea. Very moving.
Thank you,
L

lively LAVLY

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