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ASSURANCE...
I speak no more
just to lure
want to know me
First be sure
Wilderness
and
Loneliness
are
not ashore
Speak no more
but do persist
your love is
more
much more
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2022-10-30 19:33
It’s Beautiful
And you’re right, everyone is watching football. I’m absolving myself from the emotional attachment to my NFL team to pursue artsy fartsy thingums
Tim
lovedly
Mon, 2022-10-31 06:39
my foot ...balls...
are metaphors...lol
Lavender
Sun, 2022-10-30 22:32
Assurance
Hello, Lovedly.
You paint in an abstract style, but with a defined, precise meaning. "Wilderness and Loneliness are not ashore." The words emit a feeling of loss, as if they're out to sea. Very moving.
Thank you,
L
lovedly
Sun, 2022-10-30 23:28
Thanks so muchly
lively LAVLY