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another UNTITLED

To cool one wants
to quench
and
drench

in rain
and
liquid
is one's
manifestation

yours is rains
others
down that drains

what remains
of desires
nothing obtains

some still in vanilla
sustain!

Style / type: 
Free verse
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How about "Desires"?

Alid

u r singular

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