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Another Friend Bails Out

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2022-12-11 11:19

HOUR OF SADNESS

At our age
daily one needs to be ready
to go
else hear the sad news
one just goes
where heaven knows

May those who have lived a long life
''REST IN PEACE ''
convey to all
as and when

Somewhere beyond beyond
many hope to meet
God keep Hope alive
in one and all
as and when
'tis time

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
When its time it is TIME
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sun, 2022-12-11 14:26

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a lesson for us all. No one gets out alive! ~ Geez.
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Lavender

Sun, 2022-12-11 19:31

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Hi, Lovedly,
Your poem is direct, yet calm. True - when it's time, it is time.
Lav

lovedly

Mon, 2022-12-12 00:04

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your and Gee's support are my finale in all my poetree thnx
Lav

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Geezer

Mon, 2022-12-12 00:51

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to inform you, that unless there is a double entendre intended, [bale] should be spelled [bail].
Just wanted to let you know. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Mon, 2022-12-12 03:06

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Thanks corrected

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