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Angelic Love Ah!

I'm the essence of love and life
I commence with love
bear no grudge nor strife
all my life

You are now still awake
for a round two

Compose instant poetry
as I do
sunrise and sunset stand by
who loves to set ? all love to rise

who loves to be in blues
all love blue
heaven be with all
as romance floats like swans
heavens must welcome

love is only sublime
when poets two red wine define
then romance is like liquid gold
fountains through
like love divine...

romance alone must shine ---
till your lover calls out to you
sweetness be mine...
then only one can....
smile
all one's while.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
THE FREE STYLER INCOGNITO POET DO HEAR
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

flooding the stream with your poems is a negative thing to do. people will begin to think you are greedy and self-centered/self indulgent. especially the new poets who don't know you as I do. save some for later, all in good time.

*love, Cat

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I thought jess was back
but he finally loved me
as much as you do
regard me

Yes it's like hankering
greed is an ego of poetry only
I love no money

So
I shall take a sabbatical for a week
Thanks Cat's
Hope you are now well

I admire your suggestion

author comment

any time I can help you I will do so. that is what friends are for...

*love & hugs, Cat

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And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

I would say the same.~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

I too had you in my mind ....similarly
So frank of you
I shall abstain

author comment

Sometimes you get those hooks in me and this is one of those times. This is my favorite one you have penned in short while. It’s actually quite rhythmic and I’m not sure if that’s deliberate but it’s pretty amazing. First stanza is inviting and the rest rolls right along. There’s nothing about this I don’t love.

Tim

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