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Angelic Love Ah!
I'm the essence of love and life
I commence with love
bear no grudge nor strife
all my life
You are now still awake
for a round two
Compose instant poetry
as I do
sunrise and sunset stand by
who loves to set ? all love to rise
who loves to be in blues
all love blue
heaven be with all
as romance floats like swans
heavens must welcome
love is only sublime
when poets two red wine define
then romance is like liquid gold
fountains through
like love divine...
romance alone must shine ---
till your lover calls out to you
sweetness be mine...
then only one can....
smile
all one's while.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
THE FREE STYLER INCOGNITO POET DO HEAR
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-12-15 12:49
dear lovedly,
flooding the stream with your poems is a negative thing to do. people will begin to think you are greedy and self-centered/self indulgent. especially the new poets who don't know you as I do. save some for later, all in good time.
*love, Cat
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lovedly
Thu, 2022-12-15 12:57
Thanks for your advice
I thought jess was back
but he finally loved me
as much as you do
regard me
Yes it's like hankering
greed is an ego of poetry only
I love no money
So
I shall take a sabbatical for a week
Thanks Cat's
Hope you are now well
I admire your suggestion
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-12-15 13:10
any time...
any time I can help you I will do so. that is what friends are for...
*love & hugs, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Geezer
Thu, 2022-12-15 12:53
Ditto...
I would say the same.~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
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lovedly
Thu, 2022-12-15 12:59
Thanks Gee
I too had you in my mind ....similarly
So frank of you
I shall abstain
Rosewood Apothecary
Thu, 2022-12-15 17:40
Good one
Sometimes you get those hooks in me and this is one of those times. This is my favorite one you have penned in short while. It’s actually quite rhythmic and I’m not sure if that’s deliberate but it’s pretty amazing. First stanza is inviting and the rest rolls right along. There’s nothing about this I don’t love.
Tim