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And the Winner is....(Euphonous English WS)

Submitted by Rula on Mon, 2022-11-21 13:37

And the Winner is....you,
who celebrated
the virgin morning's view

who selfishly snuggled
in its lew,

who bathed in its
holy sunshine,
and in all its
blessings
went through.

You,
who sniffed with its fairies
the freshly sprayed dew,
and in its mellifluous
baritone grew grew, grew.

Style / type:

Structured: Western

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Review Request (Direction):

What did you think of my title?

How was my language use?

What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

How does this theme appeal to you?

Is the internal logic consistent?

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Contest:

Neopoem Of The Week Contest November 20th to 26th 2022

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Geezer

Mon, 2022-11-21 15:25

Mentally Mellifluous...

Very mellifluous and smooth idea. ~ Geezer.
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Rula

Mon, 2022-11-21 16:21