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AND I RETURNED HOME
Wanted a long sabbatical
the storm came
no you can't fly
the storms over your domain
come later again
till then at home do remain
be prepared
for a free flight
go home alas
now no sabbatical
keep singing or rhyming
damn you
lovedly
don't be silly
that I am
no work for me
but skipping
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Geezer
Sat, 2022-06-18 06:02
Yeah!...
you just keep making poetry; don't think about having time off. We won't allow it! Who do you think you are? having time off, indeed! I guess you missed your flight, huh? Oh well, there will be another time. Good piece about the frustration of not getting your little vacation.~Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?
lovedly
Sat, 2022-06-18 17:02
it seems you skipped these
At the last moment they canceled the flight
alarming storm
now go home sabbatical wow
now
sing your song
they r awaiting to hear your blaring deafy dear.
Next time take us along
SING SONG
ah but
THE STORM was still on
ADVANCE THANK YOU FOR READING GEE
author commentCandlewitch
Sat, 2022-06-18 06:12
dear Lovedly,
don't worry that you can't get away...make a nice cup of tea, play music that you love, and have scented bath.
*love, Cat
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Sat, 2022-06-18 12:05
high CATS and GEE
At the last moment they canceled the flight alarming storm now go home sabbatical wow now sing your song they r awaiting to hear your blaring deafy dear. Next time take us along SING SONG THE STORM was still on
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