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AMERICAN TALIBAN UPDATED

Those savages, those Taliban
who ruined all those ancient artifacts
in that land of drought and sand.
We cringed at all the shells' impacts.

The builders of those monuments
shared not the Taliban's beliefs
so with sledges and bombardments
history was rent like last year's leafs.

And day by day each desecration
we judged these people savages.
We wallowed in our condemnation
of history lost for coming ages.

But now here in my southern home
statues, flags and histories fall
of a country and its tome.
They want to erase it all.

So with refined noses turned up high
they try to rewrite history.
"Destroy all traces!" is their cry
"It's OUR decision what should be."

In name of being politically correct
Confederate history is wiped out.
One by one its symbols trashed and wrecked.
"We know best!" they scream and shout.

Thus here in the land of so called free
in shared spirit with the Taliban
they try to edit history.
Time will tell whether they can.

And now those same type "men"
are loosed by harsh cruel rhetoric
upon perceived enemies and then
shoot them as if they're sick.

But how can we feign surprise
with hatred spewed from the far left?
Who hate, indeed they must despise.
They care not that they leave us cleft.

Where now those of compromise
who see that there are other ways
and different ideas aren't all lies.
Are they lost in hatred's haze?

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Here in the south they're trying their best to wipe out all traces of the old south. They remove its flag, statues of its leaders even any name of anything which has to do with the old Confederacy. Whether the Confederacy was good or bad is not the point, the point is it was a crucial part of American history and it's being erased just as the Taliban tries to erase all thing not Muslim.........stan And now the hateful rhetoric from the extreme left has bred a madman who thought himself a hero for taking pot shots at Republicans
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Not that it was a great part of our history, but that it is our history. If the truth be known, Lincoln wasn't altogether sure that he should free the slaves and many of our presidents; although they professed that all men are created equal, had slaves. So...who was it that said, "History is written by the victor"? ~ Gee.
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Lincoln seriously considered sending all freed slaves back to Africa. None of the statues or other things these people want erased shows any slave being abused or killed. They just show brave men who defended their country.The large majority of southern fighters didn't own slaves so they could hardly be accused of fighting to preserve slavery.......stan

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it's important we stand up and shout loudly.
I like that your poem does this.
Just one thing - this line
'So here in the land of so called free'
Do you need the so at the start of the line? I think it avoids repetition and also reads better without it.
just my opinion, as always feel free to ignore.
A good poem and I enjoyed it.
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I didn't even notice that repetition. I'll get that fixed soon. thanks for eagle eye........stan

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History is not found in pieces of stone or cloth.
It is found in the memories of those who refuse to forget, those who appreciate what was lost, what was gained, and how it came to be.
I agree with some of what has been going on; symbols of oppression and hatred remind millions of us that that hatred and oppression still exist, and will come back in full force without due diligence and constant vigilance.
BUT, removing the objects that remind us all of those things, is wrong. When I see a statue of some confederate dignitary, it reminds me that we are not finished, that the struggle for freedom must continue.
Which is why I find them so ironic, these politically-correct removals, these 'sanitizings' of our history, and the present; what they really serve is to sweep the reality of the past that affects our present under the proverbial rug, so that we forget what our nation suffered through, to be what it is.
And its hypocrisy, too - I don't see them taking down statues of Washington, or Jefferson, two of the largest slavers of their day.

Respectfully, Race

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The thing these hypocrites don't seem to realize is that these statues were not erected because the leaders owned slaves. As you say Many people owned slaves. In S.C. even a few of the plantation owners were black and They owned slaves. These statues were erected to pay homage to the men's bravery and their support of states' rights. I am a southern man but even I am aware of how wrong slavery was and still is. I also realize that despite the destruction wrought upon my state and others that it was a good thing that the republic was preserved (BTW that was the original reason and battle cry of the union troops "preserve the union.") If the union had been divided who would have been here to defeat Hitler and to presently fight ISIS?....stan

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You know, I still have copies of letters home written by my great-five-times grandfather, who fought for the Union, and among the requests for socks and blankets and the desire to see her again, he tells his future wife just that - the blues all shouted Preserve The Union, as they charged into battle.
I put the current atmosphere of anti-confederacy right up there with the anti-intellectualism our nation has suffered from since Regan. There is no thought, no reflection, no real discussion or reasoning, just the gut-wrench of emotional reaction, hatred, and thoughtlessness.

Respectfully, Race

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most of this crap is being instigated by the radical left......sigh. The radicals on Both sides need to be brought back under control

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was totally deplorable, of course, but initially the disagreement was about states' rights and, as so often in human history, economical issues. Only deeper into the war did Lincoln set the slaves free to serve as cannon fodder. He turned emancipation into a military policy. Even if Abe hated the institution of slavery, he didn’t see the Civil War as a struggle to free the nation’s 4 million slaves from bondage. Emancipation, when it came, would have to be gradual. The important thing to do was to prevent the Southern rebellion from severing the Union permanently in two.
About slavery? Given just a little more time, the nation's moral compass would have pointed slave owners into the right direction. The civil war was so danged wasteful and unnecessary. In the end, emancipated slaves became "indentured" sharecroppers, a lot that was not much different from slavery. About the silly attempt to remove all historical vestiges in the South?
History written by the winner--bah! Give'em hell, Johnny Reb! Three cheers for Bobby Lee! lol.
Ali

With the blooming of the industrial revolution and mechanization of farming slavery would have soon become economically unviable anyway. But it would have likely taken longer than at the muzzle of a gun. Appreciate your input........stan

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Line one, "This" should be "These"? Sounds better, and the repetition (these, those) might give more focus to the anger and contempt that the poem makes me feel for them, in the beginning.

Respectfully, Race

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I'll check that out and scratch my bald head over it lol. And you are right about anger. In our own country exists those who would wipe out the past, change history and even see people killed to further their agenda. Brothers to the Taliban.........

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This savages, those Taliban ("these" savages...?)

I'll leave the rest alone.
Robert Lee was a hero who may have led either side. Changing the images of history does not change history.
Powerful statement.

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I'll get to that typo before you start having spasms lol. Changing images might not change history but destroying all mention all statues and all other reminders can over time lead to a total rewrite and I think these American Taliban want everything except the slavery part of this important part of our history to be snuffed out just as they want to eliminate all debate which is contrary to their beliefs to be stopped

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from state capitals. We're a Union now, but removing statues of warrior heroes is unnecessary and smacks of rewrite as you mentioned. Robert Lee and his peers were heroes for a cause. Their memorials are there and should stay. There need be no debate. They lost, but history is history. Changing it is impossible. Trying is foolish.

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Here in S.C. we removed the flag from the capitol dome which the Taliban agreed to then we moved it to a confederate memorial on the state house grounds, again as agreed. Of course this wasn't enough to pacify them and they kept on pushing. That's the problem with radicals, they are Never satisfied. If they got their way on removing confer statues what would be next? Tear down the Washington and Jefferson memorial because they owned slaves? They need to be stopped and they need to be stopped Now.............stan PS Ozymandious (sic) might disagree about destroying history

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Here in S.C. we removed the flag from the capitol dome which the Taliban agreed to then we moved it to a confederate memorial on the state house grounds, again as agreed. Of course this wasn't enough to pacify them and they kept on pushing. That's the problem with radicals, they are Never satisfied. If they got their way on removing confer statues what would be next? Tear down the Washington and Jefferson memorial because they owned slaves? They need to be stopped and they need to be stopped Now.............stan PS Ozymandious (sic) might disagree about destroying history

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They actually Are calling for removal of Jefferson and Washington memorials

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to house our history. The artifacts should not be destroyed but gently moved to the museums. The premise of the Civil War is still one side wanted to enslave people, the other side said no, and the death of hundred's of thousands was the result. all the Generals were butchers- Sherman and Lee. Let their statues be part of history...not the public parks. Germany doesn't need statues of Hitler in the plaza's but the should be preserved for history, as artifacts of the time. I would feel the same about seeing a statue of Hitler in the park as a black person does seeing Jefferson Davis.
I don't think the connection is valid. It is sick that all the Christians cut off the penis' of all the Greek statues, or Isis (not the Taliban) bombed the ancient ruins. I think its sick to destroy the statues of the Confederacy. We should have the foresight to preserve them, but just not in the center of town.

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

Then let's take ALL statues down. Including Clinton and Obama. They were ALL imperfect people after all. While where're at it let's go ahead and topple the Washington monument and raze the Lincoln and Jefferson memorials. Two were slave holders and the other ordered the death of thousands then freed ONLY the southern slaves with his emancipation proclamation.While where're at it Mt. Rushmore could do with some howitzer shelling.
These idiots demanding the removal of all things confederate have now gone on to demanding the removal of all these things. And they are Not satisfied to see them in museums. In N.C. this is what is proposed for the toppled statue at UNC and even That doesn't make them happy. These people actually want ALL traces of history removed so they can replace it with their own version ....just like the Taliban.

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yes, leaders imperfect. Gandi is no longer the saint after his pro-apartheid leanings.
FDR and Wilson were both intensely anti-semantic. But history takes a broader look, these men changed history and worked for peace. Columbus was no saint...
We cannot have statues having sex in public, or sadistic takes of Jesus.

Our public statues or for those with a universal fame and purpose.- the founders, the philosophers, and the individual warriors who were victorious or sacrificed for great causes. Even in the case of stupid wars, like WWI, without a clear reason to fight other than tribal hatreds, the Vietnam war, or the Iraq War- wars built on lies and deceptions..here we can, we must have statues to commemorate the dead soldiers. That includes the civil war. Those that fought because they felt "duty called"
General monuments to the fallen are part of our history.

But what those generals who led for an unjust cause, such as the civil war, a war to keep the institution of slavery. There they sit on their horses leading the charge in front of the state houses. Their American dream is dead, We do not honor that dream. All the statues of Stalin have been taken down. He only killed as a many as 50 million people. He is history too. Just bad history.

I don't see any statues of Hitler or Goebbels in Germany, and we don't need statues in praise of those Confederates who did nothing notable other than lead men to their death to protect their right to enslave people. History has judged them. Put their statues in a museum.

They are not to be compared with Obama, the first black President which, due his intellect and personality, became a symbol of hope for the world. Despite the fact that he deported more illegal aliens than any other president and all the rest of the stuff he did that you would never, ever in a thousand years acknowledge as your are, as you poisoned about him as I am of Trump. And one thing for sure- I do not think "Tarriff Man" will ever get a statue in our lifetime. We do not put our traitors in our public places. Whoever has not figured out that is the case by now, never will.

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

Even Lincoln said the war was not about slavery. Indeed he said if he could end the war without freeing a single slave he would. He also seriously considered sending all freed slaves back to Africa. He used the slaves only later and for the same purpose that most democrats leaders use black folks now.....pure politics. You list people who have no statues due to their savagery. I don't think there were many savage people in the south and even fewer of the southern generals were savages. The damn sure weren't as savage as Cesar.
Plus there are plenty of statues of anonymous southern soldier and there are people wanting Them taken down too. How about those in power during the genocide of A American Indians? Their statues are still up.
There is a statue of a confederate soldier on our county square. Just an ordinary foot soldier. Let some crowd gather to remove it and I'll be there with my Remington to convince them they have better thing to do.

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Now the American Taliban is removing names of schools and military bases. They will NEVER be satisfied

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