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AH THERE YOU ARE

I composed a poem
as a comment
as I couldn't post it time
was neo limited
perhaps yes 'twas on your poem
Gee
could be CATS may be
SOS

Please find it
And help me post it

ANYONE else is welcome

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
MY LOST POEM HELP FIND IT
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I was nearly
19 she maybe like fifty
with a low down hubby
she clenched me under her arms
but excited though I was
couldn't come under her charms

but surprisingly
I still feel warm
though she has merged
since mighty long

how to me
that memory does still belong
now still I wish

author comment

very nice and inspirational.

*hugs, Cat

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CATS AND GEE

author comment

found it lovedly! ~ Geez.
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