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Ah a Celebrity ----So lonely NOT ME

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2023-02-27 05:20

Ah
you will be more
if ever you became a celebrity
seldom think of being one
still
in worse solitude you will live
believe you me

Solitude is only a stepping stone
of being lonely

a celebrity read so suddenly
by all in a position
such as
you want to be
worse
no panacea

you'd want or desire
OK
hanker for more
who will give ye
just think
will thee
be never a
celebrity
don't curse me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Ekaterina Alexa...

Mon, 2023-02-27 08:53

Ekaterina Alexandrovna Sherbatskaya's picture

What a sweet poem. I hope that you are not feeling lonely. You have many friends who love you a lot. Don't forget that xxx

lovedly

Mon, 2023-02-27 09:13

lovedly's picture

ever since you have come
my charm has begun to flow
across all horizons

one day
I too will become the dawn of the day
since my
Dawn
from birth I await

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