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After Nighttime Snowfall

Black morning stillness
icy calm speaks dark reproach
shadows this landscape

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Meh
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Makes me think of dark, early mornings following a winter storm. There is an icy calm that follows. Well done.

~RoseBlack~

You're a master at pulling at the senses, this is a brilliant Haiku dark and foreboding,

This is brilliantly executed.

I wish I could convey how much this has affected me tonight, I've had a day.

Kind regards Jayne

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Masterfully written. I freaking love this!

LD

beautifully dark grey...you have made every word count! almost ethereal! I love it!

* hugs, Cat

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I had a tough time with this one. I’ve revised it like 6 times. I am really glad you all liked it. I felt it was mediocre but usually if I post something that needs work you guys tell me so. Ha, well I guess it’s acceptable. It’s definitely coherent.

Thanks for reading,
Tim

author comment

Did you mean a HAIKU ?
Tim
let me know
I'm DIM

Yup

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lovely 5 7 5

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