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A.D.D.

Submitted by Mark on Mon, 2023-10-02 05:01

They are afraid for me during these times
I sit and stare at space within my mind
During these times so surely I am tried
The times during minutes unoccupied

Find then the dream she's truly only mine
Math is simply boring the curves and lines
If we had only known its silent way
Would never feel this emptiness each day

I look outside and in my mind I see
Jessy riding windswept across from me
Unicorn she rides, royal blue and striped
Licorice reins, braided mane (she is hyped)

I love her so and nobody will know
Know moments then up in mist she shall go

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Geezer

Tue, 2023-10-03 00:57

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[curves]. that's all, nicely done mark. ~ Geez.
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Mark

Tue, 2023-10-03 02:28

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Thank you,
Mark

read/comment it's a win win
I was here now I disappear..

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