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Above the Sky Poetry Does Fly
Above the sky my poetry flies
over heads standing that high
where even eagles fail to fly
To send my poetry that high
my mortality does die
I recall the past as remembrance
some say reminiscence
at times we humans
really make no sense
elevate those
who promote nonsense
is that the beginning of life
some say 'tis life's substance
concentrated essence
Isn't such a version
sheer nonsense
someone say with confidence
poetry is just sharing virtual emotion
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
After digesting so many meaningless poems this is just an abstract of read nonsense Are we simulated auto poets
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Triskelion
Wed, 2022-02-16 02:15
Don't forget
the parallel spirits joined by the primal elements. This is the lovedly I know and wait to read.
The title is most intriguing.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Wed, 2022-02-16 17:19
THANK you for all your kindness
glory
you bring to my heart once gory
Now I compose morer poetry
only as you like to read me
you live by a lake
I also
Geezer
Wed, 2022-02-16 05:59
Only a little death...
only not so little. How sad the world would be if there were no lovedly. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Wed, 2022-02-16 11:59
Thanks GEE
BEYOND THE SKIES YOU PRAISE ME
I STILL AND WILL LIVE
YOUR GOOD WISHES
I LIVE
Triskelion
Sat, 2022-02-19 09:41
Now why
would you change a perfectly intriguing title?
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Sat, 2022-02-19 12:02
Hello
No one was reading this poem so had to change its dress slightly tho
Triskelion
Sat, 2022-02-19 12:53
I must say
The original title piqued my interest much more. The new title basically sums up the whole piece. We should vote to see who wants the new title, or the old title. Anyone else want to weigh in?
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Sat, 2022-02-19 18:23
YOU MAY ASK SOME POETIC FIGURE HEADS HERE
Scribbler RAY Mark Michael RACE_9TOGO
AND SOME NEW bees ...We could -perhaps have better interaction on
TITLES
Paul may be requested to float his views too.
Thanks to all