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Aaaaaachhhoooe Chorus

Aaaaaachhhoooe Chorus 1962.....201.......

I aaaaaahhhh...chooed
150 times
nonstop that night

My dad
who was perhaps seemingly then alive
he asked me if I was practicing for
an aachhhoing race

I acchoed again

Later till today
they, docs say

ALLERGIC Rhinitis since long
Oh nuts
my nose never bleeds
it only weeps
tears of glory
that's why no one kisses me
that's another miserable
saddened story
Aachhhoee

When I married
I achhhoed at the wedding
yes mine not yours
all laffed
as if 'twere a prank
all aaahchooed along with me
and
a song took birth
want to hear it

Achhhoooooo
That's all 'twas to it
repeated 170 times
now by 300 in a row

ACHHHOOOOOOO!!!!!
here we go...

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know each well enough
thanks have already paid my dues
jerry
bells are still ringing
your poetry is exquisite
as white as is
SNOW
but I still prefer snow -balls
all play with kids mostly
come over and see

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I still acchhhooooe tooo
allergy and death are
sisters you know..
twins

together they glow and go

acchhhhooooooo....!!!!

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contagious sneeze is rhino serious
rhyni ....tusssss

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