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4 SEASONS (Sunku shop)

Submitted by scribbler on Sun, 2018-02-25 16:47

Seasons
dividers
of time and years

Marching
through our lives
in lockstep rhythm

Winter
comes but once
at least to men

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raj

Sun, 2018-02-25 16:59

"At least to men"???? You have left me pondering and scratching my stupid silly head.. Besides, I don't know why you posted this as a Blog

raj (sublime_ocean)

scribbler

Sun, 2018-02-25 20:52

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The "men" thing was meant as the collective of humanity. Posted as blog because I foolishly posted my one per day before posting this shop poem.

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Sparrow

Mon, 2018-02-26 04:00

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Men is men now you can refer to many more if you said MAN this can refer to all genders ??? lol
See you in the next comp..
Yours Ian..

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raj

Mon, 2018-02-26 03:34

Thanks for the explanation...

Regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

lovedly

Mon, 2018-02-26 09:12

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in winter
they show
small frozen tail

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