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A Woman's Face Wears Many Masks
a woman's face wears many masks
her precious secrets to conceal
so a man may sit and ponder
if what he sees is truly real
he's a very clear-headed man
who takes his time and sets his goal
he's sure to see the masks diverge
as he taps on the door to her soul
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Comments
Candlewitch
Fri, 2011-11-04 11:38
Hello,
I enjoyed your poem!
he's a very clear-headed man
who takes his time and sets his goal
I have one of those rare animals of which you write ;)
always, Cat
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faithmairee
Fri, 2011-11-04 21:33
Hi Cat
I answered but my reply is in the wrong place. I guess I have been away far too long....lol
Faith
There must be a poem in here somewhere.
loved
Fri, 2011-11-04 12:39
The soul
can never be breached
be it a man's or woman's....
You are permitted
to have your own domain
of what you feel
you must have
this is my view though poetic
please do accept
loved
faithmairee
Fri, 2011-11-04 21:32
Dear Loved
Thank you for stopping by and for your message. So great to see you!
Faith
There must be a poem in here somewhere.
faithmairee
Fri, 2011-11-04 21:36
Dear Rosi
Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks, Rosi. They mean so much coming from you. I'm so glad you are still here.xxx
Faith
There must be a poem in here somewhere.
faithmairee
Fri, 2011-11-04 21:44
Dear Lonnie
You are correct and as sharp as ever, Lonnie. Thank you for your lovely comments and for dropping in.
Faith
There must be a poem in here somewhere.
faithmairee
Fri, 2011-11-04 21:31
Dear Cat
Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I appreciate them! So good to have you stop by.
Faith
There must be a poem in here somewhere.