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without you (poem by Barry)
how clearly I saw myself
when you brushed a rebellion of hair
to the ranks of God
quaking the mountain on which my
heart lay
in that stranger cold
without you
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Comments
raj
Sat, 2011-11-05 16:42
Dear Anna
thanks for sharing this write of Barry...it is very effective in terms of expressing the void and the craving
raj (sublime_ocean)
Candlewitch
Tue, 2011-11-08 11:01
Dear Anna,
I agree with raj. Barry is as eloquent as ever.
always, Cat
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And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
loved
Tue, 2011-11-08 11:05
eloquence and silence
are the two requisites
of a great poet
who has one for ever guessing ...
what did the poet say ,
rather mean,
and
you so excel
even when you so comment ...
just great so nice to see you
off and on kailash
loved